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Thomas, Russell Cameron -- Data Scientist and PhD Candidate in Computational Social Science, George Mason University
This textbook is an annotated/augmented text based on the President’s Advisory 1776 Commission Report, published by the White House, United States of America, January 2021 (public domain).
This critique is needed because the 1776 Report includes many errors, omissions, and contested assertions, and lacks context to help readers evaluate its content and messages independently. We justify this strong assertion via the content of this textbook.
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- Pedagogy -- the educational process or methods expressed or implied
- Authorship -- who authored the 1776 Report, issues about references, sources, and plagiarism
Appendix I. Declaration of Independence from the 1776 Report is not included in the side-by-side analysis because it is simply the text of the Declaration, without any addition content by the report authors.
Consistent with all Wikibooks, this textbook adopts a neutral point of view, and therefore does not include essays or arguments regarding the values expressed in the 1776 Report, including philosophy (ethics, morals), social justice, politics, personal motives or biases of the authors, and similar. Readers interested in these perspectives and arguments are encouraged to look at the Further Reading section.
Intended audiences[edit | edit source]
- Teachers and students of Civics and US History -- high school and undergraduate college
- Educational policy makers for high schools and undergraduate colleges
- Teachers and students of communications, rhetoric, cultural studies, and education -- undergraduate college
|Original Text||Analysis & Rebuttal|
|p1, col. 1, ¶1:
In the course of human events there have always been those who deny or reject human freedom, but Americans will never falter in defending the fundamental truths of human liberty proclaimed on July 4, 1776. We will — we must — always hold these truths.
Page 1, Col. 1, PP 1
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[Analysis & Rebuttal from regarding Memory Content in the Original Text -- what is remembered about history? What has been omitted or forgotten?]
Rhetoric[edit | edit source]
[Analysis & Rebuttal from regarding Rhetoric in the Original Text.]
Viewpoint[edit | edit source]
[Analysis & Rebuttal from regarding Viewpoint in the Original Text, especially whose viewpoints are included and excluded.]
Authorship[edit | edit source]
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[Analysis & Rebuttal from regarding Authorship in the Original Text, especially sources, omissions from sources, and plagiarism]
Other[edit | edit source]
[Any other Analysis & Rebuttal that does not fit in the categories above]
Footnotes[edit | edit source]
Further Reading[edit | edit source]
The original text of the 1776 Report is included in the following subpages, by page number, with one section per paragraph. This facilitates transclusion of the original text into the side-by-side analysis/rebuttal pages.
Original_Table_of_Contents[edit | edit source]
I. Introduction -- 1
II. The meaning of the declaration -- 2
III. A constitution of principles -- 6
IV. Challenges to America's Principles -- 10
- Slavery -- 10
- Progressivism -- 12
- Fascism -- 13
- Communism -- 14
- Racism and Identity Politics -- 15
V. The Task of National Renewal -- 16
- The Role of the Family -- 17
- Teaching America -- 17
- A Scholarship of Freedom -- 18
- The American Mind -- 18
- Reverence for the Laws -- 19
VI CONCLUSION -- 20
Appendix I: The declaration of independence -- 21
Appendix II: Faith and America's Principles -- 24
Appendix III: Created Equal or Identity Politics? -- 29
Appendix IV: Teaching Americans about Their Country -- 34
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