Wikijunior talk:Ancient Civilizations/Mayans
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[edit] References
http://www.lost-civilizations.net/ancient-civilizations.html - Accessed 22 August 2005.
w:Maya civilization - Accessed 22, 25, 29 August 2005
--Shanel 03:50, 30 August 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] Coverage
Acceptable. How mysteriously they flourished and how mysteriously they end; how their calculations were as accurate as modern ones; how Adolf Hitler stole Mayan stuff from other countries and they got bombed; and why only three are left today. Not mentioned.
[edit] Accuracy
I know little about it, so I don't want to comment, although I doubt that the descendants are still living. I thought who's living are the descendants of the Mayan's slaves.
[edit] Grammar and tone
Only acceptable. Parts of it, if not most of it, are too difficult for younger readers of eight or nine. (Topology, for example.) The tone is not very consistent.
These are my comments for this module. Kayau David Copperfield MOBY DICK the great gatsby 06:38, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
