Talk:Social and Cultural Foundations of American Education/Edition 3/6.6.2

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You put a lot of good information into your article Elizabeth. I think you gave great suggestions for gaining/sharing control, respect, and attention in the classroom. Although, I might revise using the word "weapon" because it gives the visual imagery of violence. Your introduction is very good. Maybe adding a scene depicting this type of unacceptable behavior would grab the readers’ attention more. Or perhaps you could find a video clip of a disorderly classroom on "You Tube" to add in a sidebar there. You need to work on your citing. There are no internal citations and the references at the bottom aren't in the correct format; reference APA style. Your questions are valid questions that go along with the article, however they are not application style questions and there is no essay question or response. Overall, you did a good job on getting the basics; if you continue to play with it, it will only get better! Drauszsi 15:20, 3 October 2007 (UTC)