Talk:Engineering Acoustics/Room Acoustics and Concert Halls
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1) The text should be impersonal, written in the passive form, devoid of jokes and anectotes. Try to use a level of language that is less colloquial and more similar to what is expected in a dictionary. 2) Use the textbook and try to make the definitions more accurate. Your description of the direct fields should be more like: component of the sound field in a room that involves only a direct path between the source and the receiver, before any reflections off walls and other surfaces." 3) Sign your page. 4) Complete the page as many articles are still incomplete. 5) Good plan.